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Many years ago, on canvas I was drawn. He kept me black and white, until I was born. He told my parents: ‘Handle this painting with care.’ Confused they replied: ‘But this painting is bare?’ He smiled, gave them the painting and went away. My parents painted a splash of knowledge on me every day. They stroked love and insight on me, until complete - Finally, I was ready and respectable for the world to meet. Hung up on a gallery wall, the painting was always under observation, After time, the criticism of the world had ruined this creation. No longer vibrant, my true colours started to fade. No longer perfect, I am now what the world has made. From a distance, they say I still look exactly the same - No one sees the cracks and chips when they are to blame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/6/2017 1:17:00 PM
Very real Ashley! I really loved it! As life goes on, new chapters start...hopefully a restored painting appears.
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Date: 1/19/2016 7:30:00 PM
ENJOYING THIS ONE A SECOND TIME. SKAT
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Date: 2/6/2015 5:23:00 PM
We all start off as a blank canvas. And every picture that is made on each canvas should be handled with Love. Very good poem.
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Date: 8/28/2014 2:39:00 PM
WOW - this is just an amazing write! I love it! Pandita
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Date: 7/23/2014 3:44:00 PM
Ashley :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/7/2014 8:23:00 PM
Ashley,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/7/2014 12:57:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ashley. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/5/2014 10:23:00 AM
This a wonderful introspection Ashley...If you look closely we all have cracks and chips some bigger than others. Outstanding piece my friend...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/4/2014 2:17:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ashley :) - I choose your first beautiful written poem - Love it !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/4/2014 9:47:00 AM
PS, everything about this poem, is beautiful. From birth, to the way The Worlds Reality. Parents, have one of the biggest rolls when painting a child's world. Every piece of clothing counts. Epic ending by the way... Linda
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Ashley Jade
Date: 7/4/2014 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda, so glad I came across poetry soup, so many talented poets! Will definitely participate :) looking forward to follow you too :)
Date: 7/4/2014 9:44:00 AM
WOW, I love it Ashley, the imagery's awesome... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:07:00 AM
how criticism of the world wound us .. beautifully depicted ..Ashley i loved it !
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Ashley Jade
Date: 7/4/2014 9:58:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/3/2014 11:32:00 PM
Loved it
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Ashley Jade
Date: 7/4/2014 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 7/3/2014 6:55:00 PM
Dear Ashley: So much pain in these lines. I sense disillusion here? Leon
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Ashley Jade
Date: 7/4/2014 10:00:00 AM
Your senses are intact :)

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