The Pain I Fell Inside

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this is for any one who has ever been a victim of violence or bullying or abuse. I know the pain you fell i was bullied all the time in school so i know how you fell. Don't become a victim take a stand if not for yourself please do it for someone else.

Help me please let me out i am trapped in my pain. The life i live is insane inside my pain you can't see. Every day this pain i must embrace i try to tell but i am told don't you dare. Your life is full of beautiful things mine is full of dirty things. I am young and my body is beaten and bruised all my life i have been abused. On my face i show my pain please help me unleash my pain. I want a life of beautiful things not a life where i am forced to do dirty things. Can you help me stop my pain so in my mind i can stop the rain.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2011 9:20:00 PM

Very Deep.. the emotions seem impossible to stop......Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA

Craig Schaber
Date: 11/14/2011 3:12:00 PM

thanks you have a nice night to