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The Pain Has Stopped

The pain has stopped ……finally I ‘m off my knees can hear myself whisper…. I’ll be okay…please let me be okay even if it's just for ….today it’s funny how life goes one day you have it all the next nobody knows ………you or cares who you are what you do or where you been the autographs you've signed when people were easily wooed but now, they only care about the color of your sins as for me I ‘ll stand again on my own again …but I’ll stand again but i am on my knees to say the pain has finally stopped ….thankfully got to a point where life did not matter….where going on was a debate dragged me down life’s long ladder left me there …. to cry and I did and I have ….and perhaps tomorrow i will again but no more tears... today , thankfully ….the pain is gone for now Irish

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Date: 4/7/2010 8:53:00 PM
So, this is not from personal experience then, but fiction? But you write as if you know quite well. How does one know so well, if one has not been there? Were you thinking then of celebrities? I think you are right on about this, Irish. Great work! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:31:00 AM
Beautiful poem, to just let your emotions flow is always the beginning of healing and mend. just the start. and your second stanza speaks a lot about people who go on with their lives if they are happy one day, and see a person so depressed, they don't bother to ask even if they know of you. there are few people in this world who will actually sit down and really listen. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/27/2010 4:17:00 PM
Michael, you give me hope that one day the pain I carry will be gone. Thank you -- I needed to hear your words today. God bless you, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2010 9:47:00 PM
wow, beautifully written
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Date: 3/10/2010 5:43:00 PM
Glad that the anguish is gone and life is worth living..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/9/2010 2:59:00 PM
Wonderful write Michael...its all about taking a day at a time...Allie
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:44:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 9:36:00 AM
WOW this is such a powerful piece i loved it. it really spoke to me and how i have been feeling i loved the flow everything was perfect and i am happy to be your first comment on this wonderfully touching piece. Jo
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