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The Overdose

You have your story I have mine You’ve lied about more than my allotted time My fingers shake as I write this rhyme Blood boiling quake that’s been so very kind Tell the world your story, sure I’ll only agree that we did not concur I’ve lied about what? You didn’t say The response you’ve sought is here today Still I tremble to contain myself From happy to red is where I’ve delved You’ve presented your story with no evidence You don’t have to believe me but THAT makes no sense Is this just for your poetry’s sake? You say I’ve justified lies I’ve made What lies were they? Just let em know! But until then let YOUR lies show So I am numb yet my mood fluctuates? I’m not crazy yet confused fills the slate? YOU seem lost; the Soup is your plate Only on the internet will others relate Go hard or go home! Slander me? Yes you’ve tried No beating around the bush There’s no bush needed to hide Team PS says so slamming That’s the ONLY thing holding me back This is as blatant as it will be Only for the team I will slack N O B O D Y K N O W S Y O U Your poetry’s been read But to yourself and the planet You’ve been L O N G L O N G dead You don't HAVE to understand but respect it You have so much wisdom YET you're defected

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/14/2013 11:48:00 AM
be brave....whenever you get to a low point look back at the basic..asked yourself why are you doing this or thinking about this..it all comes down to i love myself.. noone can love you like you do..
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:33:00 AM
Oh Sweets- we had a few of these in the day, 'bout 2 years ago. Between Billy the kidster, Sweetheart, PD and me- they ran away from our sacred spot screaming ;P Got any problems- let one of us know :))))
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/21/2012 11:35:00 AM
lol thx for your concern, Amy :)
Date: 6/20/2012 11:06:00 AM
Venting often is the best way to air your anger, confusion and frustration. Well done Brittany! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:10:00 PM
Great capture of emotion!
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Date: 6/19/2012 6:54:00 PM
My Respect Is With you my Dear, Sending Some LOVE, FOR I HAvE So Much To Give... My THoughts Exactlly!! On THIS... I FEEL YOu!!! Xox0 CarMa SwEeTHeaRt
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Date: 6/19/2012 3:47:00 PM
there will always be negative elements,with non progressive words dear, don't be drawn in,step on weak minds,excel,angry write,lol,peace
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Date: 6/19/2012 1:27:00 PM
I could feel the rage as I read! Woohoo! You will always have my respect... Now try to cheer up! :o) Let past fires be burnt... At least for his sake I should hope..lol
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/19/2012 1:52:00 PM
I've said all I had to say. I'm done :)
Date: 6/19/2012 10:55:00 AM
wow laila ali with a pen
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/19/2012 12:54:00 PM
Jason... I was going for Jason
Date: 6/19/2012 10:40:00 AM
Peace and many blessing to you.
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Date: 6/19/2012 10:37:00 AM
WoooooooooooooooooooW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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