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The outward action received

The outward action received as red cardinals emerges singing on top of the bird bath releasing heavenly tunes while the four of clock flowers began to open as the church bell chime just in time for mass the holy spirit lands deep inside my heart my spirit soars opening the church doors only God knows why these flowers opened and closed the holy trinity's now exposed

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/5/2024 7:10:00 AM

Dear Yolanda, I loved how you beautifully captured the divine presence in the simplest moments of nature and worship.The imagery of red cardinals singing atop the bird bath and flowers opening just as the church bell chimes evokes a spiritual connection and reverence. Your words are filled with a deep sense of faith and wonder as you reflect on the presence of the Holy Spirit in the world around you. It's the sacredness found in everyday miracles and the mystery of divine grace. Magnificent work!- Blessings, Daniel

Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/6/2024 3:11:00 AM

Thank you very much many blessings to you Daniel.