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The outing

Retirement home museum trip to see relics under public care.

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Date: 12/9/2023 2:15:00 AM

Congratulations!

Date: 12/8/2023 10:28:00 PM

Clever work Tom! People losing their marbles comes to mind. :) Cheers - Gary

Tom Pickering
Date: 12/9/2023 7:00:00 AM

:) - yes....

Date: 12/8/2023 9:31:00 AM

This was a clever play on words...Congratulations on your first place in the contest

Tom Pickering
Date: 12/9/2023 7:00:00 AM

Thank you very much for the kind comment.

Date: 12/7/2023 1:02:00 PM

My mother is in assisted living now, I feel this one, quite profound, congratulations Tom~

Date: 12/7/2023 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win, I enjoyed the twists in meaning and logic with this one.

Tom Pickering
Date: 12/7/2023 5:44:00 PM

Thank you so much. I haven't tried this style before, so thanks for the prompt!

Date: 12/2/2023 2:15:00 PM

OH the irony.......