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A work of art, I speak to you today. I live and breathe the sad life of a boy with solemn eyes and little time to play; an urchin left to seek each simple joy of finding water, food, and place to sleep. No smile shows on my face, but in my hand a tiny spray of flowers I will keep... my lone possession in this barren land. An orphaned boy am I, poor and alone, who reaches out to you with pleading eyes. No home for me, no treasures do I own; no loving arms to soothe my tearful cries. For just your smile and scrap of bread or two, one special flower I will give to you. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Best Rhyming poem July-September 2017 Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged: 10/01/2017 ~3rd Place~ Premiere Contest: Artwork Sponsor: Lewis Raynes Judged: 09/06/2017 The picture above is of my oil painting, "The Orphan," for which I used a photograph from the November 1975 National Geographic magazine as a reference.

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Date: 1/31/2020 11:03:00 PM
This poem is the perfect compliment to your amazing artwork or vise versa. Bittersweet story, flows nicely.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/1/2020 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Juliet. I appreciate your visit to my poem and your very uplifting, supportive comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/2/2017 10:27:00 AM
Sandra, beautiful artwork and words , CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 10/2/2017 5:51:00 AM
Congrats Sandra on your well deserved top placement!
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Date: 10/2/2017 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win with such a touching poem.
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Date: 10/1/2017 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on your fine win with your beautifully written sad and moving poem. Such wonderful poetic expression. Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/1/2017 9:33:00 PM
A great sonnet Sandra, you always amaze me with your rhymes, congrats on a fine win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, John, for the great contest, my placement and your uplifting and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 9/8/2017 12:34:00 PM
Great painting.... great poem
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Date: 9/7/2017 10:11:00 PM
Wow, great painting along with a well-written poem. Congrats on your fine win, Sandra.
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Date: 9/7/2017 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations to a lady truly blessed with gifts! Janice
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Date: 9/6/2017 9:38:00 PM
This is so sad, and beautiful and thought provoking in one, congratulations on your win Sandra
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Date: 8/30/2017 9:37:00 AM
Hello, Sandra...how are you, my friend...what a great work of Art...with the painting and words...excellent my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, ^WW^ for your very uplifting comments. Sandra
Date: 8/30/2017 6:33:00 AM
A sad painting, but a lovely poem that touches the heart, Sandra:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. I appreciate your supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 8/29/2017 6:13:00 PM
Heidi, you never disappoint! How talented you are, and what a touching poem. A fav for me.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2017 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunlite! I appreciate your supportive comments! Sandra
Date: 8/29/2017 5:48:00 PM
Beautiful poem to go with the picture. God luck in the contest - this should do very well.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes, for your positive comment! Sandra
Date: 8/29/2017 4:25:00 PM
How beautifully written.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/30/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dale! Sandra

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