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The Order of Thieves

She dances around In the firelight As the embers rise Into the night Brothers and cousins Play fiddles and drums Her skirt swirls around As her spirit hums She comes from a family Of tramps and of thieves She's a gypsy by nature Like a tree with its leaves By day as they hunger They head into town The women do dances The men pilfer 'round With all of their needs They load up and go Back to their camp Until their next show They see it as victory For what they have won They have no remorse For what they have done 5/15/2012 For the contest, "Gypsies, Tramps And Thieves" by Lisa Cooper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/31/2012 3:23:00 PM
Has a great rhythm and is the sister to my Gypsy Dance. Are we fascinated by these itinerant people?
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Date: 5/28/2012 4:07:00 PM
Glad to finally be seeing this one. Congrats on your win. You did a good job.
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:43:00 PM
congrats on your fascinating win,rock..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:59:00 PM
Rockman,, Congratulations in, Lisa's contest. It's been sweet reading many of the winners out here this week.. Take care~ PD
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Date: 5/24/2012 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Rockman. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2012 1:49:00 AM
Rockman congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/24/2012 12:13:00 AM
Awsome write, Randy!! Great flow and love the way you told it! CONGRATULATIONS! on your win, well sone!! :) big huggs, love deb
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:56:00 AM
Gypsies have always been a mysterious and romantic group of nomads to me. I confess your info doesn't surprise me as they have to find some way to exist. Nice story and as usual, great rhyme!
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:07:00 AM
nice rhyme and flow! good luck in the contest.
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