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The Order of Pisces

His mind is still like a smooth, glassy pond empty and silent in the eternal present devoid of thought devoid of emotion Waves cradle and caress, soothing his restless soul Mother Nature has found her lost child Mother Nature is rocking her baby to sleep... The sea is calling calling him home home to his beginnings home to his heart to his roots, his core to his origin... He is enchanted by the waters He needs, he craves the waters He is the waters... By: tryerson Motif: Nature

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/9/2014 7:32:00 AM
Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, tim
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Date: 2/8/2014 7:50:00 PM
tim well our poems are kind of low on that list, but I am sure impressed by this one!! Congrats for the win. Always love seeing you show up on a winner list! Are you Pisces? I love how you made this about water, so important to that sign of the zodiac.
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:29:00 PM
Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Tim !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/1/2013 12:49:00 PM
Waves cradle and caress...beautiful
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