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The Opressive Orange

They closed the gigantic gate The orange mice are behind the bars They lost their hope in fate The strange color so far it frost their freedom rope, the hate of the orange honey in the jar and its bitter taste The mice were locked up there their actions the owner irritate houses were knocked ,but their fashions and the orange suits came late Orange is to be eternally worn Strange; to the stigma is a token in jail, prison and the bay Orange layer is prayed to be torn The change has to be spoken The mice in there , but no word to say

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/14/2016 11:52:00 PM
hafssa Aj, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/7/2016 5:29:00 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2016 5:43:00 PM
thx a lot Sara ;)
Date: 3/6/2016 8:13:00 PM
Hi Hafssa, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Enjoyed the read....Vlad
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:23:00 PM
oh thank you Vlad :)
Date: 3/6/2016 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Hafssa
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:23:00 PM
thx Nayda Ivette Negron :)
Date: 3/6/2016 10:00:00 AM
Hafssa, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:04:00 AM
thx Laura Loo :) I appreciate that :)
Date: 3/6/2016 9:10:00 AM
- Hafssa, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:04:00 AM
thx Anne Lise Anderson :)

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