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The Open Sea

Your eyes-The open sea Each gaze, a wave, engulfing me Caught in the current-Strong and fast Drowning in moments-Deep and vast I grow less certain, everyday If I will be able, to find my way Back to shore

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Tasha Taylor

Date: 4/16/2015 6:20:00 PM

Alexandra Steele, you have such a way with words! Wow!!! I love the image that you painted in my mind! Good Job! I can't wait to read more of your work. <3 Tash

Skat A

Date: 4/15/2015 6:24:00 PM

ALEXANDRA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2015 6:04:00 PM

Alexandra, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/13/2015 6:49:00 PM

Wow. I love this...well done!. Im going to tuck this away in my favs. BG