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The Only Star For Me

On this verdant place Surrounded by blue oceans… Many billions dwell Yet on this crowded planet Only my sunshine rises Entered Mystic Rose Rose The Only Star for me Poetry Contest 8/11/2022

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Fj Thomas
Date: 12/22/2022 5:59:00 PM
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So very loving dear Harry.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/26/2022 12:13:00 AM
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oh to be that star xx
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/20/2022 8:17:00 AM
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A lovely tanka dear Harry. I enjoyed this one very much :) Alice
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Bill Baker
Date: 11/14/2022 2:15:00 PM
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Great entry for the contest, Harry! Good luck my friend! Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2022 8:46:00 PM
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I believe in the profundity - and the simplicity - of what you have written, Harry. Amidst this vast universe, the sun rises for you (and you alone!). Beautiful perspective, without which all is lost. :) gw
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2022 3:18:00 AM
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Ahh!! Romantic work you have penned in this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I would hope you are her sun and moon. Sara
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 11/8/2022 11:04:00 AM
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May the sunshine continue to fuel your days with joy and peace Harry, great poem!
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Deb M
Date: 11/8/2022 6:35:00 AM
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Beautiful Harry…..the last line is so lovely! Debx
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Sotto Poet
Date: 11/8/2022 5:49:00 AM
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Your star is shining as well as your great Tanka. I like your last line: The Only Star for me Poetry Contest. Best wishes for the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2022 5:25:00 AM
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I like your poem, Harry-- especially the ending.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 11/7/2022 10:55:00 PM
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We all have favorite star.
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