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The One Who Survived

Life is... Unending holes. Your pale angelic face Twirling in each corner of home. You died! Feb-06-2016 Written for the contest "The One Who Survived" Sponsored by Sara Kendrick

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/17/2016 12:40:00 PM

Rahy, thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/19/2016 7:46:00 AM

Same to you. Hugs, Rahy

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 2/15/2016 11:20:00 AM

Congrats well done xxx

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM

Thank you Wendy. Hugs, Rahy

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/13/2016 3:16:00 AM

Hi Rahy. You summarized death very nicely with economized words.... Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:48:00 AM

Thank you Teddy for your kind and encouraging comment. Hugs, Rahy

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/11/2016 10:55:00 PM

Sad, sad. Congratulations on your expression of love and sorrow,so succinctly. Love, Joyce

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:48:00 AM

Thank you Joyce. I appreciate your visit and your kind comment. Hugs, Rahy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 10:26:00 PM

Hi Rahy, Congratulations on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Linda. Hugs, Rahy

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/11/2016 9:49:00 PM

Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Rahy.

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Upma. Hugs, Rahy

Eve Roper

Date: 2/11/2016 12:51:00 PM

Heartfelt. Congratulations on your win!

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM

Thank you Eve. Hugs, Rahy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2016 12:39:00 PM

Thank you for participating in my contest “The One Who Survives”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Sara. I truly enjoyed participating in your contest. I truly appreciate the placement. Hugs, Rahy

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/11/2016 12:07:00 PM

So true !! Their presence is everlasting !! Well done!

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:46:00 AM

They are always with us. Thanks for the visit Carrie. Hugs, Rahy

Elaine George

Date: 2/11/2016 11:52:00 AM

Congrats on your top honor with this great Cinquain, Rahy.

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:45:00 AM

Thank you Elaine. Hugs, Rahy

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/11/2016 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM

Thank you Susan. Hugs, Rahy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/11/2016 10:51:00 AM

well scribed, rahy.. fine congrats on your win!..huggs

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:43:00 AM

Thank you Nette. Hugs, Rahy

Lin Lane

Date: 2/11/2016 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations and well done, Rahy.

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/11/2016 10:26:00 AM

Thank you Lin. So kind of you. Hugs, Rahy

Luaer Solnox

Date: 2/5/2016 2:43:00 PM

I like the abruptness... it works well for the theme. Thanks Rahy for the chuckled grin.

Rahy Hy
Date: 2/11/2016 10:23:00 AM

Thank you Luaer. Your visit and encouraging comment is highly appreciated. Hugs, Rahy