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The One I Miss

The one I miss You left our family recently it's only been a few days You were always my favorite aunt You have always been so special to me. I enjoyed our talks, you knew what to say You knew my dreams and what I'd want You were the one that called me tunia and made up a silly song to sing whenever I was sick or injured I always called you Auntie Conna You had an answer for everything and always used compassionate words I loved your butterfly kisses and warm hugs I loved being with you but you lived so far away You made my childhood fun when you'd visit You'd always help me collect my lizards and bugs. I always tried so hard to make you stay I'd cling to you so you knew you'd be missed I wish I could cry and shed some tears It's been so long since they flowed I thought by crying I wasn't being strong But you understood and calmed my fears. You loved my poetry that changed As I'd grow You helped me learn and see when I was wrong. I want to have you back with us But I know you'd still be suffering in pain You were always so careful to hide it away Not wanting pity or anyone to fuss You'd suffer quietly and never complain I know we'll be together again one day I'm so glad I called you recently To wish you a happy birthday and filled you in on all the news You were so pleased to hear from me. No matter what I would have to say With you, I felt that I could never lose So now I'll hold you in my memories

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2015 11:04:00 AM
A lovely and touching tribute to a person dear and close to your heart, Bonnie. One day you will meet again! ~ Regards // paul
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Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts
Date: 7/28/2015 11:21:00 AM
Thanks again Paul Yes this was written about my favorite aunt. we kept in touch a lot and even though the distance kept us apart we were always as close and the phone and hearts.
Date: 2/2/2015 5:30:00 PM
G'day Bonnie... A nice personal tribute for a much loved aunt. Thank you Bonnie - Lindsay
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Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts
Date: 2/4/2015 4:07:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem and letting me know your feelings. thoughts about it. Yes she was the best. and will be missed forever . On this earth.
Date: 1/21/2015 8:03:00 PM
Perfect except for one small error. You used was twice in third line of 2d stanza. Is full of so much feeling and thoughtfulness. If I could, I would want to have both of you as my friends. God bless you Bonnie. Thanks for emailing it to me. Jim Horn
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Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts
Date: 1/22/2015 11:28:00 AM
thanks for pointing that out. I hope I can change it

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