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The Once Mighty Moon

The paths were arcane and the truth not easily known, the creatures were formidable and man's ways easily obscured, be the black air warm or cold. It was she who presided over such paths and creatures, and saw the man and his secrets and knowingly kept them, but cursed them all the same. If it was with remorse that I stared out of night's window, restless just before rest, it was a remorse of her bidding; jewels adorned her reproach. 20th July 2018

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Date: 8/5/2018 2:39:00 PM
I so dearly love dark poetry and this is exceptionally crafted dark poetry! Oft the dark and the she in dark poetry is based upon a real life past experience,as oft is the case in my own dark poetry. Is such the case in this fine offering? A fav, this is awesome my friend.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/5/2018 11:56:00 PM
Thanks for enjoying and fav'ing, the dark is just that, dark and not easily known.
Date: 7/23/2018 9:49:00 AM
I think I enjoyed this one even more than your Sun one.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/24/2018 12:12:00 AM
Thank you, there for those who may.
Date: 7/20/2018 7:16:00 PM
I had never thought along this theme, so it was with marvel and suspense that I read on. Most enjoyable.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/21/2018 4:36:00 AM
Thank you Mark, very encouraging words.
Date: 7/20/2018 4:30:00 PM
Lovely post So great to read your work.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/21/2018 2:51:00 PM
So sweet of you...thanks .
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/21/2018 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine. You're among those I write for.
Date: 7/20/2018 8:37:00 AM
Great work...TAH
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/20/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, encouragement much appreciated.
Date: 7/20/2018 8:30:00 AM
Wonderfully unsettling piece ;) xomo
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/20/2018 9:14:00 AM
As always, too kind, thank you.

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