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The Old War Vet In the Pub

This fire warms me, every bit of my soul, Down at my regular local. Sitting alone, all the thoughts in my head, To ponder before they're made vocal. And the menu for the night on the old chalk board, Hot pasta, soup, oysters or a steak. They even have treats for after the meal, A meringue, ice cream or cheese cake. Soft music wafts throughout the whole place, Past pokies, dim lights, and horse races. And of course, as the place fills with people from work, It fills with the regular faces. I sit in this seat, same time every day, Just an old war vet of a male. It's here i feel safe, my family of friends, Sitting quietly just drinking my ale.

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Date: 10/25/2016 1:51:00 AM
I like this. Very well written. Of what war are you a veteran?
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 10/25/2016 2:23:00 AM
Thank u so much Janis, although I m very fortunate to have never been in any war. My poetry comes from my heart and my observations, ur comment means so much as u r showing me my insights r hitting the right marks. I thank u for ur comment as it verifies I'm on the right track. Cheers
Date: 8/13/2016 5:44:00 AM
Simple but effective. We all need a safe place to go. Good from David in NZ
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Date: 8/12/2016 10:15:00 AM
Would that all the veterans could find such a place, and such a feeling. Nicely written Lewis, thanks for the visual it brought to my mind.
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Date: 8/12/2016 5:49:00 AM
What an enviable comfort ... A painter would have a lovely sketch from what you say ...
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