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The Old Smile

And when did He give thee the power to kill Your own brothers and rape mothers, just to steal Love away from those innocent flowers Before they even know how to bloom, And attract bees to rape her again and again But she smiles burning in pain Feeling blessed because of the love she gives And having the mightiest power to forgive. Now all’s casted with the doomed sky And He, a stealer of human souls Emerges once more; with the stroke Of midnight; and the traveller is Too tired to walk another mile, Stops by our home and sings the old smile, “And the sinners are sinned several times With the start of the sun, till the stop of the shine.” And it’s this song, our anthem That sets us free, From the form Of the coward and the fearless Me... -Avee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/31/2015 9:41:00 PM
:) happy new year
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:13:00 PM
Hello, Abhinandan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Abhinandan Subba
Date: 11/30/2015 12:42:00 AM
thank u very much.its my immense pleasure n honor to be in this group with u people. looking forward for better times...
Date: 11/27/2015 10:42:00 AM
Hi Abhinandan, what a superb first posting! This is a very profound, powerful and amazing piece! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Abhinandan Subba
Date: 11/27/2015 11:43:00 PM
thanks for the appreciation. it motivates me.
Date: 11/27/2015 12:32:00 AM
A deep write, AS...;) , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Abhinandan Subba
Date: 11/27/2015 11:45:00 PM
thanks for the appreciation.i feel most of my poems are dark but i hope that darkness is good for me. kp in touch

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