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The Old Rocking Chair

The old rocking chair slowly rocks with the breeze on the porch of the empty farmhouse, waiting for new stories to be told. Heidi Sands

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Judy Ball

Date: 11/7/2016 12:01:00 PM

Oh nicely done Heidi. Very descriptive and wonderful imagery. A seven from me. JB

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2016 12:57:00 PM

Thanks Judy! I appreciate that.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/7/2016 9:49:00 AM

Yes with breeze in empty farm. Lovely.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2016 12:56:00 PM

Thank you :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/7/2016 8:54:00 AM

This is so beautiful Heidi. The scene you have created, the feelings of happiness and time, in such a short piece are amazing. I absolutely loved this.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2016 8:57:00 AM

Chris, I am happy to hear you love this short one! :) Thank you.

Mike Hauser

Date: 11/7/2016 8:51:00 AM

I love this!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2016 8:56:00 AM

Awesome! Happy to hear that, Mike! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/7/2016 7:39:00 AM

Hi Heidi, In a few words you said so much. Nice imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2016 7:42:00 AM

Hi Alexis. Thank you ! Have a nice day :)