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The old man's daughter

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The old man's daughter

Heard the old man's daughter
Screaming, touched once more.

I grabbed my courage and got my gun.
Walked out to the bare land.
Knocked down the door.

"You haven't met me, I am the only son".
Pulled the trigger and shot him dead.

Those weary eyes stared back at me.
Those last words ran through my head.

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  1. Date: 5/23/2012 5:02:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lidija. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Vresk Avatar Lidija Vresk
    Date: 5/26/2012 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol i wish the same to you.
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 8:20:00 PM
    this is so sad,yet wry well written,love your work,keep up good work,love mom

    Vresk Avatar Lidija Vresk
    Date: 5/22/2012 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks mama(:
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 5:05:00 PM
    Very nice... Terry

    Vresk Avatar Lidija Vresk
    Date: 5/22/2012 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankss
  1. Date: 5/22/2012 4:18:00 PM
    Very nicely done! Thank you for sharing this with us.

    Vresk Avatar Lidija Vresk
    Date: 5/22/2012 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you(: