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The Old Man From Far Away

this old man is always there after your soul no one cares he's a greedy old man he wants what you got all to himself he'll put you away like a toy on a shelf don't give in to his dark evil stare you may not like it but he is always there there shining eyes filled with greed run while you can he hardly let you breathe run little boys run little girls don't fall or nothing will be yours he hunts all night even through the day here he comes the old man from far away

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Date: 4/20/2016 1:07:00 AM
Colton Charlson, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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Date: 8/29/2014 1:05:00 PM
interesting personification...... Your talent shines and your should find a following here on PSoup...... If you don't let the old man get hold of you..... Great writing...... Regards...... Jake
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