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The Old Grist Mill

[img src="http://www.wallpaperpassion.com/upload/18797/water-mill-wallpaper.jpg"] the old grist mill stands nestled in the rocky bank.. red fall leaves surreal............................by Sara Kendrick vibrant blue sky glows stronger shadowing my dim life's light.......................By Doris Culverhouse red stained swift water rushes onward to the sea.. slow decaying mill.............................by Sara Kendrick Vibrant life vacant Emotions rush, rapids flow heart and zest soggy....................................by Doris Culverhouse The once spinning wheel silent Red Birds watch an era leave........................By Sara Kendrick rocks wear smoothly slick as time ticks a new way starts Cycling ways and days......................by Doris Culverhouse

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Date: 12/5/2015 1:15:00 PM
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Date: 10/3/2013 10:58:00 AM
Love the team work Doris, mother & daughter... what a praising poem.. lovely win............SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2013 7:00:00 PM
congrats on your wonderful poem taking first place :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 3:59:00 AM
Way to go daughter..First place in the contest..Mom
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:51:00 PM
Outstanding Doris and Sara! Congratulations. I'm off to read your other winning piece.
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:21:00 PM
oh, I just saw your mom is on the list too!!! awesome
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:20:00 PM
A WELL DESERVED win. I see you get to claim the honor. BIG congrats to both of you!!!
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Date: 10/1/2013 3:20:00 PM
congrats on winning my team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/24/2013 7:43:00 AM
I really enjoyed this at your mom's poetry page and here it is again and you've marked who did which parts. This is great work from you two. Hope you score high!!
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Date: 9/23/2013 2:28:00 PM
Great to see a new work from you..Mom
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:04:00 PM
Nice to read both the mother and daughter,
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/29/2021 6:45:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 9/22/2013 12:21:00 PM
This is so beautiful you two, I am quite enamored by the awesomeness of this poem! Mother/Daughter can be the best team at times! I am glad I had the opportunity to read this poem in completion now, very wonderfully done! Great Work!!
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 6/29/2021 6:45:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 9/22/2013 12:11:00 PM
- So skillfully composed of mother and daughter. - Nice to see you Doris! - Hope all is well with you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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