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The Old Gray Barn

You stand alone Weathered and torn Overgrown by weeds and thorns There is something about you That I cannot explain- A mystique that draws me in As I sit and gaze upon you You give me a sense of belonging In a world without understanding You are the one constant in my life That gives me peace and not strife You're more to me than just the Gray old barn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/24/2014 6:58:00 PM
This was like a painting with words. If your words were pigments, they would be vivid and attractive.
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Date: 12/2/2013 7:08:00 AM
thank you, jan; soup mail
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:29:00 PM
nice work sometimes simple things are the best in life
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