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Somber gray barn, boards creaking Humble, meek and mild like the weathered dreams Falling gentle as rainfall, calming the weary heart With tender breaths of laughter amid the pleasures Found beneath the edges of this massive structure Beneath the rusty tin are stables and beasts All thriving from the care taken by a farmer’s gift For nurturing with sincerity and honesty and love Brilliant rays of sunshine leaking through the boards Coloring the dusty interior with blushing rays of light If these battered boards could only speak The tales they’d tell, the memories they’d bring back Escaping the pores of gnarled and enduring lumber As the elements blast away at the craggy assembly Creating reasons to tremble with longing for the past Wishes, warm and wild, obey the heart’s insight Leaving faded hopes and dreams on the stall doors Waving to the cow in colors of lost hopes, dreams Feelings that feel like they’ll never be lifted up Soothing away the anguish of forever looking back Somber gray barn, boards creaking Laughing at the goodness you’ve come seeking Whispering of a past that never seems at peace As the heart wonders through the distressed thoughts Of a love story that has died and a soul gone on Somber gray barn, boards creaking Answer my prayers – you know what I’m seeking A flame of hope, a blaze of imagination, a flicker of inspiration… glowing on my spirit like a revelation Discovered in the boards nailed across the entrance Somber gray barn, boards creaking Reveal your truth to me… my prayers are penetrating Rustling the old lumber with nails from the past Where I long to go again… before my heart ascends To be with my Creator in heaven’s lovely realms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/30/2021 6:42:00 AM
It's, indeed, a very masterly write. No match!
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Date: 7/29/2021 8:30:00 AM
Amazing! Truly Poetic. I admire.
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Date: 7/21/2021 12:59:00 PM
wow, amazing description of this place made less common by your poetic words!!
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Date: 7/20/2021 5:44:00 PM
Barns remind me of my childhood. This poem takes me back to those golden days…Thank you Gina, this sublime poem brings me tears of nostalgic happiness..
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Date: 7/20/2021 4:21:00 PM
What stories old barns have to tell, new life born on a bed of hay, little calf and tiny lambs, with the help of the farmers hands, lovely memories for sure. A beautiful free verse Gina. God bless, Belle
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Date: 7/20/2021 11:57:00 AM
Gina, you have penned a beautiful poem, I have always been fascinated with the old barns see on country drives, the history they could real, sort of haunting but in a good way. Great example for your contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 7/19/2021 3:50:00 PM
I love travelling through the countryside and seeing all the old buildings. There are stories everywhere to be told. Wonderful poem my friend. Stay well.
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Date: 7/19/2021 3:28:00 PM
Feelings I remember because of your reminder.Thanks
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Date: 7/19/2021 9:47:00 AM
My kind of poetry, Regina! I love old barns and have written a number of poems about them. Very nostalgic and brings back memories of the farm I grew up on in Indiana - Bob H
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Date: 7/19/2021 7:20:00 AM
Yes if old buildings could talk what a tale they could tell. Very well told with a sense of sadness and longing for old times to be renewed. A lovely write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/19/2021 6:49:00 AM
Something about the scent and sounds of old buildings. Yours has brought you closer to God!
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