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I can't promise you forever For it's not mine to give Today is what I offer you For as long as I shall live I can't promise you I'm worth it For it's you that must decide My love is what I offer you And all I have inside I can't promise you your hopes and dreams For they're yours to make come true My devotion is what I offer you To always help you through I can't promise you no heartaches For the good comes with the bad Understanding is what I offer you Through the happy times and sad I can't promise you you'll love me 'Til they bury me six feet deep Commitment is what I offer you For my love is yours to keep

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Date: 8/23/2010 8:18:00 AM
absolutely love it, its going to my favourites list
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:02:00 PM
Noone can ask for more. Excellent. Enjoyed. Ralph
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