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The Offer

I can't promise you forever
For it's not mine to give
Today is what I offer you
For as long as I shall live

I can't promise you I'm worth it
For it's you that must decide
My love is what I offer you
And all I have inside

I can't promise you your hopes and dreams
For they're yours to make come true
My devotion is what I offer you
To always help you through

I can't promise you no heartaches
For the good comes with the bad
Understanding is what I offer you
Through the happy times and sad

I can't promise you you'll love me
'Til they bury me six feet deep
Commitment is what I offer you
For my love is yours to keep

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  1. Date: 8/23/2010 8:18:00 AM
    absolutely love it, its going to my favourites list

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 7:02:00 PM
    Noone can ask for more. Excellent. Enjoyed. Ralph