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The Ocean Deep

The ocean is home to life unknown Life that goes unseen They live in depths we can not reach A mystery they will remain. Man can travel and live in space And we’ve even reached the moon But to reach the depths of the ocean floor May not come to soon. Two men dove to the Marianas Trench The deepest depths so far It took five hours for the journey down They witnessed creatures bazaar. Their journey was historic A scientific leap The venture held a load of danger As they slipped below the deep With mans imagination It never seems to end If there be any way You know he will try again

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Date: 3/9/2017 6:11:00 PM
Great write. If either were possible I think I'd choose the ocean floor!
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Ricky Sholar
Date: 3/11/2017 1:18:00 PM
Thank you for you wonderful comment. So glad you enjoyed the poem.
Date: 2/21/2017 9:48:00 AM
Cool poem, Ricky. I think I would rather live on the ocean floor than in outer space. I enjoyed the read:)
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Ricky Sholar
Date: 2/21/2017 3:06:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I think both places holds a tremendous amount of danger.
Date: 2/21/2017 9:47:00 AM
A marvelous write throughout. The ocean is a world all its own.
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Date: 2/21/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thank you. i am glad you enjoyed it.

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