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The Ocean

In an instant the tide has changed The warm ocean breeze has turned frigid The ocean... believing I could walk upon it I now can barely keep my head above it I am waiting while I'm wading For my feet to be set firmly on shore In the meantime, I accept my fingers will wrinkle I'm prepared for the riptides to challenge me But I will not drown... Not today... Not tomorrow... I am waiting while I'm wading For the day when my feet are set firmly on shore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/9/2016 12:11:00 AM
It's just a lovely path! Thank you, and welcome!
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Vince Bandille
Date: 1/31/2017 6:25:00 PM
Thank you George! Deeply appreciated, and glad to be here.
Date: 11/30/2016 8:32:00 PM
The ocean... believing I could walk upon it I now can barely keep my head above it.... Inspiring one indeed!!!!! Congrats on being featured...
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Vince Bandille
Date: 12/1/2016 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Bernard!
Date: 11/27/2016 1:37:00 PM
I was completely drawn in. Such courage! I found myself inspired by your fighting spirit...
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Vince Bandille
Date: 11/27/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thank you so much this... I'm truly humbled by your words.

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