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The Obsidian Plague of Midnights

In Spring there’s friendship that’s lasted through the Winter, all those cold nights of salted drops and quilts of snow. The obsidian plague of midnights, melancholic drapes, but all the while the candlelight of friendship did glow. you’d think she’s the sun - i wax and wane in restraints having lost my way The flickering of her tongue as she wet our weep with wine. O how the shadows flickered on the walls as if in mirth. The slow burn lasted as the wind howled, the chimney choked. Her wrinkled, waxy skin, a kin to suffering and pain. each deep etched line spoke a sticky web of knowing lips barely moving That Spring, she showed up with an armful of daffodils, and silliness, tears stinging her neck, this honeybee. She understood madness, and the brumal sun. Outliers could not drink our elixir nor interlope upon our phoenix rising. cascade of the moon no longer afraid of dark - white lacy curtains

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Date: 4/19/2024 2:43:00 AM
Dear Kim, this poem is brilliant in all aspects. loved the Haikus but also the longer-lined poem. Like a painter you depicted the seasons with great imagery. It's a fav for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2024 7:08:00 AM
I appreciate you so much, dear Victor! :)
Date: 4/18/2024 9:56:00 PM
Your poem tells a beautiful tale of friendship, seasons and endurance, and I love the title, Kim. This is a fave. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2024 7:07:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much! So glad you liked this one, sweet Evelyn!
Date: 4/17/2024 8:18:00 AM
Dear Kim, I loved every word and how you sketched the seasons of friendship with the deftness of a painter. Through wintry melancholy and spring's bloom, the flame of camaraderie endured. Amidst shadows and whispers, your bond, a beacon in the obsidian nights. Like daffodils in spring, her presence brought light, dispelling the darkness. We find peace in the cadence of shared understanding, weaving tales of resilience amidst life's tempests. - Blessings Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2024 7:06:00 AM
Bless you, Daniel! So gld you liked this one! I had fun writing it. Today I will be busy with cousins in town. I don’t know if I will get any writing in. :)
Date: 4/17/2024 5:52:00 AM
so beautiful and touching poem, friendship can be special, i love the extraordinary first verse, thanks poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2024 7:03:00 AM
That wa the first line that got the poem rolling :) Blessings!
Date: 4/17/2024 4:44:00 AM
The elixir of friendship warms the heart, Very nicely penned Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2024 7:02:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 4/16/2024 10:00:00 PM
You just amaze me. I am going to fav this! This is one of the most haunting poems I have ever read. It breathes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2024 4:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 4/16/2024 4:46:00 PM
an engaging Haibun, Kim, with some beautiful, descriptive lines (Outliers could not drink our elixir nor interlope upon our Phoenix rising. The Haikus fit in so well. I see much skill here. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2024 8:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara!
Date: 4/16/2024 4:41:00 PM
Wonderful, lyrical prose that holds the reader's attention from beginning to end, with a well-placed haiku to crown it all off. Great job, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2024 8:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad!
Date: 4/16/2024 11:37:00 AM
Great prose that is very poetic and not bland like some prose can be with a fitting haiku at the end... A great read Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2024 1:25:00 PM
Thank you so much! I feel encouraged! Hugs ~ Kim

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