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The Now of I Love You

by R. Ellis Blue falls on the river tonight falling and recoiling in a splashing wave of stars like frozen rain. I miss the most of you that I know which is a little piece of something small but powerful No burning flames no one the sames just the now of I love you. .

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Date: 8/2/2011 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Rob. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:52:00 AM
I like your simple statement - "something small but powerful" - because that is how it usually is. Says a lot in few words. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Rob Ellis
Date: 7/29/2011 6:39:00 PM
hi daver, yes, it's a true story too!
Date: 7/25/2011 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rob. Love, Carol
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Rob Ellis
Date: 7/29/2011 6:38:00 PM
thanks, yes, it was a pleasant surprise for me :)
Date: 7/24/2011 8:47:00 PM
Congrats Rob on your featured poem this week on PS... a great one to share with us all with luv..
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Rob Ellis
Date: 7/29/2011 6:37:00 PM
thank you !
Date: 12/18/2010 6:07:00 AM
Sweetly emotional with vibrant visuals Rob .. enjoyed the Now of I Love You... lovely free verse usage.. thankxxx for your welcome comments on my poetry today.. enjoy your weekend with luv..
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Date: 12/18/2010 4:41:00 AM
Nice passionate thioughts you have penned so well, rob
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