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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

cageless cotton plumes, majestic wings drink the pulse-- one beat captured free April 4, 2016

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Date: 4/10/2016 10:53:00 PM
Sam, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/11/2016 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Linda-- much appreciated :)
Date: 4/7/2016 8:15:00 PM
very creative!! Congrats for HM
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/8/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea-- I appreciate the kind comment. Have a great weekend :)
Date: 4/7/2016 3:32:00 PM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/8/2016 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Sara-- I appreciate your kind words. Thank you for dropping by with the encouragement. Have a great weekend :)
Date: 4/7/2016 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations Sam
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/8/2016 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Nayda :)
Date: 4/7/2016 9:28:00 AM
That's what I like about you Sam! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/8/2016 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Hans-- always wonderful words of encouragement from you :) I will try and get back the muse and put up some new creative works soon...thanks for the kind comments though, much appreciated my friend. Have a great weekend :)
Date: 4/7/2016 3:04:00 AM
"drinking the pulse" ... a very interesting phrase there. Immersive and intriguing. Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/8/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thanks Tim-- I am not so good at monoku's it would seem...just not my natural process and I don't generally score too well on them. But thank you for hosting this one, I enjoyed the write-- have a good one :)
Date: 4/7/2016 2:52:00 AM
Such a lovely monoku.. no wonder a win... big congrats Sam..
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/8/2016 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma-- very kind of you to comment with such support, much appreciated :)
Date: 4/4/2016 11:40:00 AM
Beautiful monoku Sam like the imagery and the alliteration:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sam Jameson
Date: 4/4/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan :) Very kind of you-- I appreciate the warm feedback. Hope you're having a wonderful day, take care!

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