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Not real, pure imagination.

It was the quietest of hums deep pitched that appeared to be surrounding me. It did not have the sizzle of electricity and was not a light or the fridge. Hunting high and low trying to make sense of where it was originating from. A few hours later and still no wiser I sat back and pondered on things. Next I tried turning off the power which made not a smidgeon of difference. It was still there quietly emitting sound I knew what I needed to track it down. I got out a stethoscope and placed it first to the walls and then to the ceiling. Ah now I knew what it was, munching away slowly demolishing the whole of my house. Feasting away, leaving behind a clue a small pile of very fine wood. Yes I was infested by a very small grub commonly known as a wood worm.

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Date: 3/28/2017 3:17:00 PM
wow! like locust invaders.
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Date: 3/7/2017 10:02:00 PM
Clever and entertaining write! So glad you tracked down that pesky noise, and, hopefully, handled the problem. Good write, clear story with good delivery, it more than held my interest. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:05:00 PM
Very good write, Shadow...oh my ... not something I want around my home.. a 7 Hugs
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Date: 3/7/2017 10:25:00 AM
A wonderful piece of writing.
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:20:00 AM
A well executed poem, Shadow, it maintains the suspense till the end:) great example for your contest:)
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Date: 3/6/2017 4:25:00 PM
A suspenseful poem which keeps the reader curious and on edge at the same time. A wood worm infested house could be a real calamity; it's bad enough when it concerns furniture, let alone a whole wooden house!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/6/2017 12:01:00 PM
Nice piece . So well composed. I am familiar of this task of wood worm
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Date: 3/6/2017 10:49:00 AM
Great piece, Shadow. Kept my attention up to the very last word. Hoping it is fiction
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Date: 3/6/2017 6:15:00 AM
Excellent and such a vivid descriptive write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/5/2017 4:55:00 PM
Was there a doctor in the house? A saw doctor perhaps?
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Date: 3/5/2017 12:56:00 PM
Wow! Interesting story well told! Wood worms--Imagine that! Janice
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:59:00 AM
Wow, you really were able to narrow it down there, Shadow. That was great how you did it! I have a question for you. Can our poem be an old one that we date? Thanks for your last contest. I loved its theme.
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Date: 3/5/2017 8:30:00 AM
Shadow, great example for your contest, I liked your sense of humour evident in this poem
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Date: 3/2/2017 2:20:00 PM
Such a vivid descriptive write and the imagery of being able to hear those little critters eating away really chilled me. :-) hugs Jan xx
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