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The Nirvana Star

Tonight I reappear in my gleaming silver gown, my neutrons fusing to glitter your little town, a family reunion of stars dancing in Milky Way, you'll see the Helix Nebula of Aquarius in silver array. Celestial ballroom to brighten the dwarf planet you call, poor Pluto in desolate black hole of sudden downfall. The tiny planet no longer charms earthly creatures, transient in eternal universe-- oblivious preachers. The comet they've named Halley had told me long back, exploding stars in supernova fulfill wishes--their knack. Alas! We laugh but burn to make your planet glow, until this loop circles to your Sun in Big Bang blow, aloof from this sham I'll pour love as a sprinkling spinner; Oh! Just so you know in Kuiper Belt, Pluto is a winner. July 4, 2020 You are a star Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

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Date: 7/10/2020 8:46:00 AM
Just magnificent! Amazing informative poetry! All the best in the contest!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes Krish :)
Date: 7/7/2020 5:12:00 PM
Aditi, this poem is so beautiful, descriptive, and informative. Delightful! Yes, Pluto IS a winner! :-) Janice
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:23:00 AM
Glad you loved my words Janice. Thank you for your warm wishes. Much love :)
Date: 7/7/2020 3:37:00 PM
Lovely read..esp love your opening couplet and the Pluto alliteration of the last line :)
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Date: 7/7/2020 3:39:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation Susan! :)
Date: 7/7/2020 3:31:00 AM
What a beautiful write this is, I love your knowledge never mind your penmanship. Thanks for popping in to read mine xx
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/7/2020 10:07:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed my muse Mandy. Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation. :)
Date: 7/5/2020 4:19:00 PM
Perfect, Aditi! What a phenomenal poem, Mind blowing. Love the Tiltle. Best for first place is your masterpiece! Must go into my FAVs at once. Stellar wishes, my friend.! Panagiota Romioa,
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/6/2020 11:50:00 AM
Honored to receive kind appreciation from you Panagiota :) Thank you for your gracious wishes. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/5/2020 10:10:00 AM
Flexing your celestial poetic muscles, you've crafted a fine piece of poetry about our cosmos. Well done, enjoyable.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 4:02:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed my muse Greg. Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation :)
Date: 7/4/2020 8:54:00 AM
This is darling! Enjoyed thoroughly <3 My best to you in the contest Deepa, xomo!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:48:00 PM
Glad you loved it Maureen. Thank you for your kind wishes. Love, Aditi :)
Date: 7/4/2020 8:52:00 AM
You are a star, so its easy for you to personify being a star.... A great poem for this contest..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:48:00 PM
Really overwhelmed by such kind words from you! Thank you for your constant encouragement. It means a lot :)

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