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The Nightmares

Nightmares that come are so bad I'm afraid to sleep Exhaustion enters making sleep needs reach their peak A little light sleep to settle down falling falling deeply sound The horror no no go away nightmares please dissipate Same dreams every night since my darling baby cried She nursed, very well fed in the morning she died Nightmares night afer night awaking my baby I dread Being rocked, rocked, rocked, looking down my baby's dead (My adoptive mother lost a child, a little girl at age nine months old. Back then people used home remedies very seldom saw a doctor. The child had been sick with a cold, mother fed her and the next morning she was dead. The doctor who examined the corpse said that she had had pneumonia and choked to dead on the mucous.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/11/2010 8:25:00 AM
Very emotional piece.
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Date: 2/3/2010 2:14:00 PM
sad to have lived through this for nannie. Hope she is holding her again. sniff
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Date: 2/1/2010 6:35:00 PM
Sara first thank you for your comment on my poem. Second on your poem wow I don't know what to say it really makes you think about life and your children. I have 3 myself and one of them is only 6 months old. I just couldn't immagine. I look forward to reading more of your work. Mike M.
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Date: 1/31/2010 7:33:00 AM
When you look at how people lived not that long ago and to how we live now, wow > we don't know how lucky we are >> James
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Date: 1/31/2010 7:22:00 AM
I like that a lot. It was different. And yes I have lost a family member. Trying to be strong. Thank You.
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Date: 1/30/2010 4:03:00 PM
oh what a nightmarish experience for her or anybody to go through. God bless them!
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Date: 1/30/2010 1:34:00 PM
An awesome write, but sad event Sara. This type of infant death was quite common in those days of which you speak. It is something that is less common in this day. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/30/2010 6:52:00 AM
A great capture of the essence of life's experience. The poem is a gift to let us know how lucky we are. Thank-you SK.
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:08:00 AM
Very Sad.... Good writing, though. A tear jerker. Thanks for sharing. Love, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/29/2010 8:08:00 PM
oh, how horrible! What a nightmare indeed! well written couplet, sara, with much feeling. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:49:00 PM
Sad .. so sad... creatively written Sara... I AM BACK... my friend... luv.. blessings.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:17:00 PM
Sara, this is so very sad. Wow, it had to have been so hard for your Mom! Home remedies were good but with the complications of pneumonia I guess there was nothing else she could do. So sorry. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:14:00 PM
A very sad story, sara, and you portray that sadness excellently with your description of the sleepness nights. LUv, Andrea
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