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This a poem dedicated to my loving Dean who joined our Father in Heaven.. I can never forget her hugs and hellos each time she sees me during enrollment and during duties... One of my toughest professors but a grade earned from her is worth every sweat and sleepless nights I have.... Her whole name Anita Mondala.

THE NIGHTINGALE LOST HER LAMP Anita’s eyes were brown. She was the kindest of angels. Her speech firm with authority but reassuring with a glass- like sensitivity; she seemed to know all. Prompt as a rooster's first crow, that's how she is. She stands like a lioness ever ready to act, a channel to prolong the patient's life. Her heart is a captive cog of dedicated compassion: as a wife, as a mother, as a Dean, Professor, and as a nurse. She stood always regal in white. Bearing a sanction of life and death with each shot made by her gentle hands. She had Tiger eyes for signs and symptoms; sponges to absorb order and pressures, she was simply a lamp for a sick person. Our batch, she handles with iron fist. Labeled as "black sheep" – for some of us are noisy cans but empty inside. Black sheep but later turned into the cream of the crop. She stood as our Samson pillars then despite canyons of doubts and critiques, our batch defies the odds. Yet, one day a snapshot happened – She fainted while teaching. She was brought to the hospital, scrutinized and observed like the frog in my sophomore year. I was one of the nurses who rendered care. I watched, how the shining light in her eyes turned to stormy sadness. I have heard how her sturdy voice now sounded a tattered tape only syllables and groans, no more. Her before supple glowing skin turned a wrinkled ash — all tautness gone. Finally, she needs only bags of blood in two days her life passed my Anita... _______________________________________________________ Sponsor Thomas Martin Contest Name Show but Don't Tell Placed 3rd... O.E. Guillermo 5:15 pm, May 19, 2015

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Date: 7/22/2015 12:17:00 PM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 7/15/2015 6:16:00 AM
Beautiful Olive Eloisa. She did what The Good Lord put her here to do, take a look at the others, take a look at you... Time to move on. Time to take the next step.
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Date: 6/4/2015 10:40:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 5/25/2015 7:28:00 AM
Such is life...the physical ending way too soon, but we have the living memories. A beautiful tribute, indeed.
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Date: 5/24/2015 6:20:00 PM
This is such a heartfelt write, Olive. So sorry to hear that someone whose life has deeply touched yours and many others had to die early. You've done well with this tribute. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:26:00 PM
Olive, Congrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
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Date: 5/22/2015 6:21:00 PM
OH MY. IT all can end so quickly. This was a passionate write and so tragic.
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Date: 5/21/2015 7:18:00 PM
Olive, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/19/2015 11:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Skat.. =")
Date: 5/21/2015 2:22:00 PM
this descriptive write brought tears to my eyes Olive - her memory will live on through this wonderful tribute- congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan.. I'm glad that you have been touched.. =")!
Date: 5/21/2015 2:13:00 PM
A beautiful and heartfelt tribute for her, Olive Eloisa. Her compassionate spirit has been captured forever in this poem. Very nicely penned! :)
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Kelly, I could not have done this better without the support of someone.. Im thankful that I met her and truly her life--an inspiration..=")!
Date: 5/21/2015 5:55:00 AM
Very touching tribute. Your poem is very expressive and impressive. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:09:00 PM
Hi Ravi thanks much for stopping by and leaving a comment.. =") the person behind the lines is also lovable.. that is my dean..
Date: 5/20/2015 7:12:00 AM
So sad, so touched Olive. Sorry for your loss...........);Afolabi.
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Date: 6/3/2015 8:49:00 AM
thank you so much.. =')
Date: 5/19/2015 9:03:00 PM
What a brilliant write! Such powerful words and imagery, WOW! I was a nurse for many years, and know what kind of strength it takes to be dedicated to a challenging profession. I'm so sorry if this was a real event, and dear Anita passed on. Excellent, a 7 from me!
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Date: 6/8/2015 1:25:00 AM
LAura, I thank you so much for your generous comment.. =') this a big boost!
Date: 5/19/2015 2:04:00 PM
Sad to see a very strong and caring person become so physically ill..I know that was painful for all who loved and cared for her to watch.I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for dropping..Sara
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Date: 6/2/2015 5:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Sara.. she is indeed a strpng and caring person.. :)! SHE IS ONE among my fave mentors... they build up my character, skills, competency and discipline as a nurse ..
Date: 5/19/2015 1:11:00 PM
Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and pay tribute to the memories of a respected teacher and friend. Emile.
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Date: 5/23/2015 1:48:00 AM
thank you so much Emile.. :)~
Date: 5/19/2015 10:57:00 AM
What a lovely and touching tribute, Olive_eloi! Your poem is expressive and impressive. People like her will be missed. Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/21/2015 1:30:00 PM
And congratulations on a deserved win!!! Well done!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/20/2015 5:49:00 AM
thank you so much Paul... :)!
Date: 5/19/2015 10:10:00 AM
Olive this poem is so sad I am so sorry for your loss 7 and thanks for visiting my poem today
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Date: 5/20/2015 5:48:00 AM
thanks too Broken wings.. :)!!!Her memories lives on through us her students.. :)!
Date: 5/19/2015 8:36:00 AM
This is an exquisite poem! Way beyond a 7 for me! So very, very beautiful! God bless you!
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Date: 5/20/2015 5:47:00 AM
thanks much Anna .. my simple way to say my love for one of my dearest mentors..
Date: 5/19/2015 8:24:00 AM
So sory for your loss, you brought her spirit to us with this powerful reflective piece.
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Date: 5/20/2015 5:43:00 AM
thanks much Richard.. :)! God bless us all.. ~olive eloisa
Date: 5/19/2015 7:18:00 AM
Very beautiful dedication. RIP Anita. Even here in India a nurse Aruna Shanbaug passed away after living in a vegetative state for 42 years, but for her it was a release....nice poem. 7
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Date: 5/20/2015 5:36:00 AM
Sometimes when sufferings too much it both pains not only the person but also those who love her..... thanks much for stopping by..

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