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The Nightfall

up, about and going, once again throughout the day, like the time that drives us through. a mix of emotions been i through, nothing exquisite but. filled my tummy nd off to sleep. then came the winter so firm, i lost my hold. woke up to shock, remember nothing but. all the bad came trembling down. overwhelmed by emotions, tears rolled by. mind went blank and i stared into the dark of night. i did drouse off later, woke up to a fresh chapter no different but. had no sight of the day that passed. up, about and going, once again throughout the day, like the time that drives us through.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 1:05:00 PM
nice to see this one again. :) LINDA
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Date: 6/24/2015 4:10:00 AM
- Hello Pavan - I would be delighted to welcome you to P- Soup - Hope you will enjoy being here with us :) - Share your thoughts and words - Good luck with your writing :) - A quick greeting from Norway // Anne -Lise :)
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:30:00 AM
Hi Pavan, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:38:00 AM
Pavan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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