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The Night Sky

Under the cover of darkness I will show you the way It’s a lesson I will teach you blind It’s a sequence that you will learn and never forget To keep my promise I will wrap you in my cloak all night! I will help you escape the chaos that consumes you And cherish you from dusk to dawn Wandering with you on a path to fill that void I am the night that engulfs you, a roof to your home! And at dusk, your command I will abide You can hear me in those dark overtones Whispers of shadows as they speak I am the coal that waits to burn in your eyes! I will hold all of your secrets, wrapped up In sparking stars tonight I will twinkle and wait for you to decide When you remove those blinds At dawn and let in the light! 27.2.22 Contest: The Night Sky Sponsor: Anna Marie Kaianah

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Date: 5/5/2022 10:17:00 AM
What a beautiful love song Carol filled with compassion and a sense of gentle protectiveness! Congratulations on your win!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/9/2022 9:51:00 PM
Thank you dear Sam.....I am glad you liked it....much love :)
Date: 5/1/2022 6:38:00 AM
"I am the night that engulfs you" - Great. Congratulations!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/1/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj......much appreciated :)
Date: 4/30/2022 11:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carol! Thank you for entering my contest. ~Anna Kaianah
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/1/2022 8:23:00 AM
Thank you dear Anna....it was my pleasure to write on the night sky....a topic close to my heart :)
Date: 2/28/2022 7:41:00 AM
I love the night sky and I love your write. Have a great/blessed~~day/week writing away...................
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/1/2022 9:55:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula....me too, much love :)

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