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The Night Shift

Every night since you've gone I sleep on both sides of the bed as if to reenact sleeping with you... If I switch sides quickly enough I feel the warmth from my own body as if you were beside me... Back and forth wrapped around my body pillow as if it were you I hear myself breathing in my pillow in my own ear... Perhaps my sin was falling for you so quickly my fantasy lover then again would you want a man who sleeps with himself to keep warm... I need you like salt storing you in my body to taste the salt of your skin sweating you when passion overwhelms me... ~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/14/2014 10:51:00 AM
The emotions are strong and the longing clear... Sad, but great write.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/14/2014 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Carol!
Date: 4/14/2014 6:49:00 AM
Passionate work...Sara
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/14/2014 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 4/14/2014 1:18:00 AM
This is very lovely and I have certainly felt this way in the past....Sleeping in an empty bed once filled is a lonely thing indeed! Well done Ken !
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/14/2014 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Deb!
Date: 4/13/2014 9:42:00 PM
I sure can relate to this, this is a great poem, loved it.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/13/2014 9:50:00 PM
Thank you Arthur for stopping by!
Date: 4/13/2014 2:42:00 PM
the longing gives this piece its own mark of subtle romance so well scribed!.. spill ink,ken... simply one o your best!.. huggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/13/2014 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Nette for visiting my humble verse!
Date: 4/13/2014 12:11:00 PM
- A lonely bed ..... with dreams and longing - Touching and sensitive Ken!! - Well done as always. - I like your write. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 4/13/2014 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Anne for the lovely visit today!

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