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The Night of the Long White Words

Angel flesh on the writing table, hooked on tempered divine, lifting, blade to blade, raphe to crura, gray flowing over white, moving fast to quiet water loud water quiet water, the cakes and creams and pleasures of butterfly lips, violets woken from dusky sleep, marigolds plucked leaf by vibrant leaf, pale daffodils watered by saliva, words naming parts worked together from higher orders of geometry, serpentine salvation in the gut, bodies in tandem transit become torrent, become ecstasy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/16/2014 12:16:00 PM
Jack :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:33:00 AM
beautiful ~SKAT
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Date: 1/21/2013 3:09:00 PM
Jack, beautiful... from torrent to ecstasy... xox~LINDA
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Jack Jordan
Date: 1/21/2013 4:20:00 PM
Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this one. Jack

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