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The Night Is Deadly

They Looking At Something Far away Crying Sounds Sight, lost Darkness, near Fear engulfs mind Prey on thee Nowhere To Be seen The monster That is I Killer? Yes

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Skat A

Date: 6/18/2015 1:06:00 PM

John, that is deep, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**

John Monteblanco
Date: 6/19/2015 4:28:00 PM

Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 11:33:00 PM

Reminds me of a murder mystery. Congrats for your win.

John Monteblanco
Date: 6/19/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thanks. I was kind of going for that feeling

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/17/2015 9:30:00 PM

John, congrats on your placement in my contest! Quite an eerie and mysterious write. Well done! Love, KIm

John Monteblanco
Date: 6/19/2015 4:30:00 PM

Thank you! It was fun writing this poem for your contest