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The Night Garden

Creeping, crawling the time is calling, night has come and the dark is falling. Slinking, slithering the twilight moves, as the squirming creatures hit their grooves. Beneath the leaves the beetles advance, while the worms break free to join the dance. Their bodies swaying to and fro, in cadence with the lightning bugs' glow. Every creature big and small, begins to stir 'neath the yellow ball. Singing songs their date approves, they woo there mate in microgrooves. Tiny spiders take the chance, in hopes their lovers crave romance. But deep inside they all know, soon they'll be dining with their widowed beau. The insects carouse through the sleeping flowers, they won't wake, it's after hours. Dizzy Lizzies stretch and yawn, curling petals, they await the dawn. Tiny feet tickle their leaves, as nits traverse their tendril weaves. Only the Fly Traps join the rant, to make a meal of a passing ant. The tall grass sways like lofty towers, as mantises use their magical powers. They hide on the stalks of the sprawling lawn, in wait for creatures to prey upon. Petals glow white in their final reprieve, to be quickly replaced by new Crinum leaves. As creatures retreat and the dawn wakes the plants, The Spider Lily waits, the night to supplant.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/10/2017 12:13:00 AM
"they woo there mate in microgrooves" neat line! Spiders and mantises are my favorite. A truly enjoyable read! Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 12/10/2017 3:08:00 AM
Thank you Laura, an old one. Someone told me yesterday that they prefer my simpler older poems.
Date: 8/15/2015 12:52:00 PM
Do you mean to say that 12 of your poems here right now are still unfinished ones?? Goodness, If I ever see one of those, please let me know it is not finished and remind me to see it when it is. Ok?
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Date: 8/13/2015 3:14:00 PM
NOw this is a very DARK garden. A bit of murder going on in there (nature's style!) I really liked this earlier post of yours. It is very creative.
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James Inman
Date: 8/13/2015 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, not quite the flow I would have liked. It's one of my flower series (actual name "Spider Lily (The Night Garden)." Inspired by flowers but most written about people or other things. Many of the posts are part of that, some obvious like "Bougainvillea" (about someone I know), some not, like "Lost in My Senses" (actual name "Tibouchina (Lost in My Senses)." I currently have 12 of 21 that I'm working on. All but 1 has been posted here.
Date: 8/12/2015 9:33:00 AM
James, oh so beautifully penned A7 and thanks for visiting my randomling poem
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James Inman
Date: 8/12/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thank you BW. You are quickly getting through my meager collection. Alas, it may take a lifetime (a pleasurable lifetime) to get to all of yours. I'm considering a randomling myself.
Date: 7/13/2015 2:33:00 PM
She (your poem)walks in beauty like the night in starry sight...
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