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The Neglected Girl

Siting in darkness is a neglected face Nobody cares what is her faith Everybody hates her for what she hasn't done Everybody jealous of her intelligence Her step mother ,is so cruel Locks her in an the cellar What can she do ,when everybody hates her No body loves her,nobody loves her Neglected by everyone is a face never happy Neglected by everyone are the eyes that cry Neglected by everyone is the girl with a face always sad Siting in darkness is a neglected face Nobody cares what is her faith

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Date: 9/7/2016 12:48:00 PM

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