The Need

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The soul Stained, soiled, dirty Mucky, stinky, coated Deeply corrupt, sullied, ruined Redeemed

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2015 3:04:00 PM

All of the above, but is the element that makes plants grow. Love the write a 7 Hugs eve

Jack Horne

Date: 6/16/2015 9:56:00 AM

yes - love this one! i meant your words painted a lovely picture on the previous poem, but the pic was cool too

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/14/2015 10:55:00 AM

Sara, always fun to see you stop by! Say hi to Doris for me! this poem....so easy to relate...spending a lifetime on your last line, which perfectly answers your title! Good Work, jim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2015 1:31:00 AM

that last word is AWESOME!

David Meade

Date: 6/13/2015 9:47:00 PM

Hi Sara, I have been away for a while . . . love this poem. In the decay there is life working at the micro level, this life, is resurrection life, from death to life!! Nicely done. 7

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/13/2015 7:17:00 PM

Redeemed indeed! Love it my friend.. A7