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The Nautilus

Exchanged pleasantries Now vowed Ensconsed Memories

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David Archuletta

Date: 2/18/2009 7:51:00 PM

thank you, that inspires me, sorry about your loss. my writes come from [but dont always pretain to my wrongfully adopted son, who i will never see until he grows up and wants to]

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/18/2009 7:45:00 PM

David, this takes me back to a beautiful place and time. My husband died young, and I thought of him while reading this. Your language is very thought-provoking. And thanks for reading "Feline Survivor." She lives, and she loves, for her mama. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/18/2009 7:11:00 PM

An excellent few lines....exquisite poetry! Well done ~ Carrie

Gerry Mattia

Date: 2/18/2009 6:31:00 PM

Hmmm. . . gotta say, this one is pretty interesting. The title is what nails it.