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The Naughtiness File

Feel a bit naughty perhaps you've noticed Forgive me but it's basically your fault Having the most torrid and passionate love dreams With visions of opening your vault You willingly comply and we passionately embrace Our naked bodies locked in sweet rapture We writhe and we tumble in a meeting of souls As in the heat of the moment we're captured Till that instant divine when the world disappears There's a thunderous roar and we explode In a moment divine, a moment of pure madness We're spent with not a chance to reload We slump in exhaustion we whisper our love We kiss in a sweet moment divine In this moment of bliss only we two exist A most glorious moment in time © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 8/31/2015 9:33:00 AM
Close your eyes and ears Dragon... I don't want to tackle a romantic Dragon with puppy loves today! Since he's too young to understand... he says the wrong things to people... which only gets him looked at funny...At least until I explain that he heard a Jack poem... Then everyone understands and pats him on the head... Problem solved! You must be famous... or else they wouldn't understand.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2015 4:16:00 PM
Famous??? LOL xxxx
Date: 8/30/2015 5:45:00 PM
Okay I'll take the blame...wait...is it the ladies who are to be blamed...now I'm confused...lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2015 4:29:00 PM
Good question... methinks it's all the sweet Soup ladies that's doing it!!!
Date: 8/30/2015 1:39:00 PM
Ohh err Jack - what a passionate write and on a Sunday indeed.... and I LOVE it:-) hugs jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/30/2015 3:24:00 PM
Did I write that??? Naw... not this old duffer!!! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

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