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The Nature

To Dear Mother: Not my Mother,But The Nature Mother! How are you doing Mommy? Met you yesterday,hope you remember Me! Spent my day-whole day in your lap Loved it when sky turned on its tap Your KIDS took great care of me They're the real cause behind our glee! Your man ''Tree'' doing his job at best By giving some place to make a nest! He also allowed me to sit under his shade Sun was burning so he gave me some aid Then he gave me his fruits to eat While sun was throwing its scorching heat! Some guest arrived then,name-Breeze And announced the death of some leaves Sun was sending its rays constantly And leaves were enjoying wholeheartedly! By the evening Sun decided to leave And didn't want to spoil the evening's eve As sun left,Sky wore a full black cap! Created a hustle by turning on its tap! Your whole family was much delighted Sky perhaps thought What a great job I did;) After a while,Moon decided to join as well All across the sky,its light fell Breeze came again Whistling in my ear Saying silently ''Good Night My Dear!'' I haven't talked to them but I felt They taught me How guests should be dealt! Thank you very much Mommy! I loved the lullaby! From a Bachelor: Who loves Nature :) :) ________________________________________________________ NOTE : I used ''He,His'' for tree to enhance its importance. ________________________________________________________ For the contest ''The Nature''

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Date: 5/27/2014 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this wonderful write on nature, Saba
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/27/2014 11:44:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/26/2014 10:20:00 PM
Yup, no problem... thank you for the comment on my comment...PD
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/27/2014 1:37:00 AM
:)
Date: 5/25/2014 3:21:00 PM
Congrats my friend on the fine win..hope you did well on exams...Tim
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/26/2014 12:58:00 AM
Thank you very much..I tried my best,need prayers :)
Date: 5/25/2014 12:42:00 PM
Sabam , Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement. Stop by my blog, "Petals in the Wind" if you like. Have a sweet Sunday.... XOX~ Linda
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/26/2014 12:59:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend :) :)
Date: 5/25/2014 11:44:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, and a smile, to your comment on my comment..PD
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/26/2014 12:58:00 AM
haha..My pleasure :)
Date: 5/25/2014 9:26:00 AM
Saba, nature has a beautiful thing going on. I like the way you serenade this poem, describing and giving mother nature, a peaceful lullaby about her... Linda
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/25/2014 10:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot Linda,for supporting me that much :) God Bless you my friend ;)
Date: 5/23/2014 1:18:00 PM
- Saba, a pleasure to read your nature poem - it's really beautiful - I wish you good luck in the contest! - Have a nice weekend.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/24/2014 10:33:00 PM
Thanks a lot :) :) Have an exciting weekend :)
Date: 5/23/2014 7:33:00 AM
Best of luck in the competition. What an interesting write, I like the angle that you have taken here, that of an intimate relationship with nature. Afterall we have an intimate relationship with nature. Great work.
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/23/2014 8:15:00 AM
Right :) Thank you :)
Date: 5/22/2014 11:46:00 PM
PS... I'm like everyone else on the soup, I don't read nor support, those who don't wish it from me. I read and comment my winning poems, in one sitting. Many times, I read my winning poems, more times than I read my own poems. Saba, sometimes when I comment small like the comment at the bottom, it's because I don't know the poet. So I keep it short, and real... Take Care. PD
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/23/2014 12:32:00 AM
Good to know you then :) :) PoetrySoup is like a family of poets where we appreciate each other's work :) Thank you for telling what you actually feel..I really appreciate it :) Wishes--- :)
Date: 5/21/2014 5:57:00 PM
Saba, such a peaceful, and loving write...Linda
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/23/2014 12:30:00 AM
I do support you Linda :) My exams are on these days so I don't get enough time to read other's poems..I sure will read after exams :) Lots of love :)
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:40:00 PM
I felt the same way about you Saba, I was waiting to receive support from you, except that from which are in my contest... I don't read the new poems as often, glad I read this one.
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/22/2014 11:37:00 PM
Finally a comment from you Linda!! I was hoping to receive a comment from you (except those telling me that I won :P) and I got it..Thank you very much!! :)
Date: 5/21/2014 4:39:00 PM
Dear Saba, This poem really tickled my fancy. I love the way you personified all aspects of nature -- trees, breezes, the sun, sky, moon and even leaves. You have a delightful writing style and I hope you'll jot down a few lines on birthdays or aging for my contest. Even a joke is acceptable. I'm creating a birthday booklet for friends, including folks on the Soup. Love, carolyn
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/22/2014 11:36:00 PM
Yeah yeah why not..I would love to :) Thank you very much for your kind words :)
Date: 5/21/2014 11:33:00 AM
great write love the imagery
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/22/2014 11:35:00 PM
Thank you very much :)

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