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The Narrowest Gate

Lifted from the Earth's atmosphere without having a visible body, the narrowest gate appeared to me! Was it the Seventh Heaven? Two angels ushered me in... without asking me whom I wanted to see! With gentle voices and bright smiles of omnipotence: they opened up Life's Book saying with acknowledged privilege, " Your name is written on the first page, come with us and meet your family and friends! " Surprised by what they had convincingly said, I followed them along the golden walls where saints happily sang. I refrained from asking, " Where's God, the Eternal one? " Anticipating my anxiety, they turn to me to vanish my doubt, " Good man, you were chosen by Him for your profound faith, have patience and you will see God on His majestic throne! " I nodded and continued to follow them as my awe increased by the minute, " Don't worry, you can't die if you see Him...you are a spirit! " was their remark as the Almighty God and His resurrected Son waived me on assuring me with their strong voices, " Your trails are forever gone! "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/30/2012 10:58:00 AM
poient piece!
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Date: 5/29/2012 5:58:00 AM
Oooh goodness!!! A little bit scary, ha ha - but we are not sure what's to come. Was this a dream Andrew? Thanks for your comment and I'm glad I gave you a laugh. Can you get tickled in Heaven? Did you ask God that question? ha ha Oh, I do know he has a good sense of humour, so I'm all right there!!
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