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The Muslim

She looked into my eyes There were tears, she wept She was filled with remorse But her past was not of her doing Senseless death is never accepted Never understood Her sister is gone, no tear undone For wanting to smile, to love, be young Cultures grow old, wither and die Some linger on, and make us cry So stand up, when it becomes too clear Defend those of the weak, those in fear With voices loud, and filled with love We shall rejoice, unveil 1000 doves Kiss away those tears, the pain of so many years Look into her dead eyes, take comfort, she will smile From her grave, she will surely see The anguish left, from barbaric acts This hatred of man can never last A child is she, a shining light Sister, she would grasp your body an soul And whisper, you must continue this fight Forgive those who walk in blindness And cherish those who forgive with kindness - dedicated to a young girl in Pakistan braver than I

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Date: 11/15/2015 9:13:00 AM
WOW.....incredible tribute :) ~7~ for sure
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 11:15:00 AM
Thank you so much! hugs
Date: 5/20/2013 9:44:00 PM
'Forgive those who walk in blindness And cherish those who forgive with kindness' A beautiful conclusion. Hope you are well. SuZ
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/20/2013 9:55:00 PM
thank you so much!!
Date: 3/3/2013 4:14:00 PM
A well written condemnation of blind devotion. And well said
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 12:20:00 PM
a belated thank you!
Date: 2/27/2013 4:43:00 AM
A really great way of telling story. You can deliver it in a unique way without putting aside its poeticness.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/27/2013 8:51:00 PM
thank you very much, glad you liked
Date: 2/25/2013 5:31:00 PM
Bloodshed has become normal act. Death a regular scene. Even brutality a work of art!!! Such a waste for humans' abilities...! Who ever thinks that love and peace can be born from slaughtering is surely blurred. Only love begets love and peace begets peace! .... Very effective and moving poem!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2013 8:55:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments
Date: 2/25/2013 4:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work which is very expressively written honoring this young girl..Sara
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2013 8:55:00 PM
Thank you Sara I appreciate it!!
Date: 2/25/2013 9:17:00 AM
well done my friend....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 12:19:00 PM
belated thank you
Date: 2/25/2013 7:44:00 AM
I love last two lines. I love it all in fact! This is so so painful. Thank you for sharing. So many innocent people are dying senseless for no cause, because of brainless leaders.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2013 8:54:00 PM
thank you for you kind comments Ali
Date: 2/25/2013 7:23:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!! "Forgive those who walk in blindness" a chilling reminder of the evil that exists in this so called advanced civilization... NOT! A great write my friend! 10 out of 7!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 3:43:00 PM
Sorry for belated reply, thank you so much!!

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