The Murder

. newly sewn corn stalks relentless devastation the murder takes wing

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/14/2010 10:14:00 AM

Hey Mitch, Congratulations on your win in the contest, Bro!.......Enjoy it! ...Jimmy

James Fraser

Date: 4/11/2010 5:45:00 AM

Mitch, i can picture a sea of black creating devastation in your fine words, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2010 9:16:00 PM

This is a first for me Mitch. To see a Haiku about this particuliar subject. Good job. Agape, Moses

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/9/2010 9:45:00 PM

A murder in flight. very well said. Congratulations Mitch...Margaret

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2010 3:03:00 PM

hELLO mITCH ! iS THIS IN A CONTEST . iF SO IS THIS THE ONE -cArOLYN IS TALKING ABOUT. eNJOYED

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2010 2:32:00 PM

Great haiku, Mitch. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2010 2:30:00 PM

Congrats Mitch on your winning 2nd place in Raul's contest... excellent victory..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Nick Bagnall

Date: 4/9/2010 12:56:00 PM

Oh nice play on words -murdering the corn, congrats on a winning poem

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/9/2010 11:30:00 AM

congrats on 2nd place, Mitch, very deserving, and really enjoyed that last line, very cool reference! congrats again and thanks for all your comments!

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/9/2010 10:57:00 AM

Mitch, congratulations in placing second in my contest...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/9/2010 4:06:00 AM

enjoyed--you are good--don't show out too much, give us amateurs a chance. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/8/2010 7:28:00 PM

Neat take on the photo Mitch and luv the murder aspect of the corn ... should do well in the contest... good luck and thankxxx for enjoying my entry also... and for supporting my first contest too... my second one is also been posted today..luv.. "Sweetheart" ... hope u will enter...

Royal Trevino

Date: 4/8/2010 5:57:00 PM

ohhh.. this gives me the chills lol... good write, well just thought i should ask is the murder starting because the devastation of the corn stalks... is the corn not growing lol... sorry i'm just curious, anyways this was a cool haiku

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/8/2010 5:34:00 PM

This is by far the most intresting haiku I have ever read. good one.

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/8/2010 4:57:00 PM

very nice hope for contest if so good luck faleshia

Date: 4/8/2010 4:52:00 PM

Much captured in just three lines. I really like the imagery in the opening line. Keep on writing! Karen