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The Murder


                                                   newly sewn corn stalks

                                               relentless devastation

                                                   the murder takes wing

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  1. Date: 4/14/2010 10:14:00 AM
    Hey Mitch, Congratulations on your win in the contest, Bro!.......Enjoy it! ...Jimmy

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 5:45:00 AM
    Mitch, i can picture a sea of black creating devastation in your fine words, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 4/10/2010 9:16:00 PM
    This is a first for me Mitch. To see a Haiku about this particuliar subject. Good job. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 9:45:00 PM
    A murder in flight. very well said. Congratulations Mitch...Margaret

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 3:03:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 2:32:00 PM
    Great haiku, Mitch. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 2:30:00 PM
    Congrats Mitch on your winning 2nd place in Raul's contest... excellent victory..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 12:56:00 PM
    Oh nice play on words -murdering the corn, congrats on a winning poem

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 11:30:00 AM
    congrats on 2nd place, Mitch, very deserving, and really enjoyed that last line, very cool reference! congrats again and thanks for all your comments!

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 10:57:00 AM
    Mitch, congratulations in placing second in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 4:06:00 AM
    enjoyed--you are good--don't show out too much, give us amateurs a chance. :)

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 7:28:00 PM
    Neat take on the photo Mitch and luv the murder aspect of the corn ... should do well in the contest... good luck and thankxxx for enjoying my entry also... and for supporting my first contest too... my second one is also been posted today..luv.. "Sweetheart" ... hope u will enter...

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 5:57:00 PM
    ohhh.. this gives me the chills lol... good write, well just thought i should ask is the murder starting because the devastation of the corn stalks... is the corn not growing lol... sorry i'm just curious, anyways this was a cool haiku

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 5:34:00 PM
    This is by far the most intresting haiku I have ever read. good one.

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 4:57:00 PM
    very nice hope for contest if so good luck faleshia