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The Mountains and Me

In my cluttered kitchen, I've mopped the floor, This busy day, this task once more. I've cooked a chicken a thousand ways, The same old bird a thousand days. I know I shouldn't once complain, "Routine", I moan, "is always the same." But when it comes as one more chore, My daily grind seems such a bore. I glance up, weary, at my task, And then, through freshly, sparkling window glass Suddenly, what I've taken for granted, Becomes, in fact, to be enchanted... This view of lawn, an acre green, Fruit trees swaying, in a peaceful scene, Rolling hills, and oaks in groves, Sky is blue, and birds in droves. Our house sits high, where we can see, The hills in golden symmetry In all it's glory, with snow-capped peaks. How could one have such thoughts so bleak? No buildings, or high-rise blocks the view. Just nature's wonders, as if the world is new! Mountains and valleys capture my eyes. The joy of living, a wonderful life! God help me never to take for granted This wondrous vision that I've been handed.
Carrie Richards 11/6/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2014 4:59:00 PM
Sounds like a beautiful place to live, Carrie. Very well written to convey the fact that when we are surrounded by such beauty it makes it hard to complain. I love the meter and rhyme, my friend... Robert.
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Date: 11/8/2011 7:52:00 AM
I really like your poetry!Sounds like you live in a very beautiful place, continue to enjoy and paint with your words the beauty of it all for all of us to enjoy.
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Write me a Happy Poem" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:50:00 PM
Wonderful images painted here Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/7/2011 8:10:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on a brilliant win for this happy poem luv..
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:24:00 PM
congrats on your 3rd place win and your stunning view Carrie
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful poem and great win. Makes me happy for you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/6/2011 8:07:00 PM
A beautifully composed fine piece of poetry. A delight to read such a lovely piece. Very inspiration and beautiful imagery. Excellently accomplished. Million thx for sharing!
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Date: 11/6/2011 7:59:00 PM
* “A Most Pleasant & Wonderfully Picturesque Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carrie * The Splendour In Rhyme Flowed As Honey Upon My Heart, Yet * Tis Nothing New With You * Your Beauty Has Long Filled My Eyes * Something I Shall Never Take for Grantite * This Blessing to Behold Such Grace * Sooo You See, My Dear Precious Carrie * I Too, Can Completely Relate Amid Many Ways * Unto Your Amazing Beauties Heart & Verse * A Jewel to Be Set In Faves * Atop A Pedestal Within A Very Special Place * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/6/2011 1:25:00 PM
Oh, Carrie! I wanna come stand in your kitchen and look out the window, ok? I'll even help with the dishes, can cook up a to-die-for veggie pot pie, too! Love the po muchly, namaste~N
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:32:00 AM
Wow Carrie, this is an incredible write! Your rhyme is superior and the subject matter quite exquisite! I love how you transitioned from mundane and boring chores right into the majestic scene of nature right into your own backyard!! Awesome work!!
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