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The Mother I Want

The mother I want Mom! Just say you love me! I have never heard these words come for your lips, Grasp me when i cry, All you do is stare, Am I a freak to you? I just want a mother! All these years I've tried my damn hardest to make you proud and happy But I never succeeded. Look mom! I'm actually a "someone"! I have talents, Hear me play music, Listen to these words I write to you, What my arrows fly through the air! Mom! Please! I'm your only daughter, I'm not as beautiful as most women Or as amazing, But look at me, mom! Am I an inconvenience to you? Say the words and strike my heart, Forever I will be lost in this world, Without anyone. I love you mom, Silence, Bye "mom".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 5:57:00 AM
a very sad read. Silence can say so much., can't it? I like the way you, or your character, tries to get the mom's attention and can't. the "mom" in quotes at the end is powerful.
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Date: 4/26/2011 5:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Nickolyn. You'd have such mum in your poetry.
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