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The Most Vulnerable

(Maverick Free Verse about a true life Maverick) hey, Mr. Editor, you got it wrong labeling Allen West as Congress’s “Most Vulnerable” misnomer insult to his character ambush of American troops planned Colonel West fired shots near an Iraqi prisoner’s head information obtained, ambush prevented no blood shed, not even the prisoner’s thankless military bureaucracy forced him to retire Colonel West proclaimed, “The battlefield’s no place for political correctness” “Don’t blow sunshine up my butt,” Maverick West warned, standing his ground refused to march to a “Machiavellian Kumbaya” had he been a West Point grad West would have been promoted adorned with medals accolades for soldiers saved soldier’s mother spoke out; see it her way “I hope my son’s commanders protect him as Allen did” behind a shield of political ties Allen never hides in a Democratic district this Tea Partier rose disenfranchised Americans cheered do you think West deserves beatings from the press watch your “Most Vulnerable” rise to prominence if this hero hasn’t earned his seat in Congress Mr. Editor, tell me who has * Allen West represents the Tampa area of Florida in the U.S. Congress. In 2003, when West was a battalion commander in Taji, Iraq, he fired his weapon near the head of a prisoner to frighten the detainee into divulging information about a planned ambush. The detainee started providing information and the ambush of American soldiers was prevented. West was removed from command and the Army considered a court martial. West argued he acted to save his troops, was fined $5,000, but was allowed to retire with full honors and benefits.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/4/2011 1:04:00 PM
Sounds like a bunch of bleeding heart liberals who take everything for granted to me. Same thing that's eating up the whole country like a malignant cancer. And they wonder why the economy is so sick! It's because the morals and priorities of the nations leaders are completely out of perspective with reality. Sad, but sadly accurate.
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Date: 3/19/2011 11:28:00 AM
Carolyn, I knew this poem would rank high. Awesome! You captivated me with this write when you first released it. We aren't privileged to know the details of war and unfortunately to maintain our political correctness we must create fall guys. West is the hero. The Army officials were the cowards! Keep writing the truth! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/19/2011 10:54:00 AM
this poem is highly journalistic or rather has the fine elements of journalism or so i tend to rule. but this is just an expert way of writing conversational poetry. i like it.
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Date: 3/17/2011 6:34:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win!!!! Wonderful!! Ellen
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Date: 3/17/2011 12:07:00 PM
Congrats on a great write..........George
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Date: 3/17/2011 8:20:00 AM
Carolyn, this is wonderful, so well deserved:)))
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your 1st Place win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:26:00 AM
Super congrats for this lovely write dear friend.
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Date: 3/17/2011 3:16:00 AM
great show on earth.. a topper, carols..congrats fpr the gols! :) huggss, nette
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:21:00 PM
Wow!! Carolyn. You're wining right and left. Great subject and great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:39:00 PM
Look at you with your awe inspiring piece at the very top of the heap:) Congratulations on the contest Carolyn you deserve it luv ~Virginia
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:28:00 PM
Congrats with this wonderful winning poem, Carolyn loved it first time round. Harry
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on the first win in the contest of John, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2011 5:33:00 PM
Another beautiful and inspiring piece Carolyn. Congratulations on your poem's worthy honor in first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:36:00 AM
that's where the presidential pardon comes in. right? john
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:48:00 PM
there is a lot of controversy about this man, and not being into politics , i don't understand. but if what you say is true, then i must agree that he handled the situation beautifully. ya florida !
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:18:00 PM
great story! my friend! hold your torch high! many will follow your bravery....& I'll be in the front! jimbo
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Date: 3/9/2011 12:34:00 PM
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Date: 3/9/2011 12:22:00 PM
I'm sorry to hear those sad ones were based on real life : ( But at least you got some great poems out of it all : ) Jack
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Date: 3/9/2011 12:09:00 PM
Thanks for all your encouragement, Carolyn - I'd never tried a ballade before - it was tricky but it wasn't quite as hard as it looked, I thought. I loved your Prince of Thieves. Do you always write about real experiences or purely fiction - or a mixture of both?
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Date: 3/9/2011 12:08:00 PM
John Wayne would have shot him in the leg and we would have all cheered, you do what you have to do, and if you go to my profile I have uploaded a pic of a couple hobbit houses
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:56:00 AM
Great write my friend. Brilliant and bold as the Poetry should be. You have highlighted an issue, which would give a new life and hopes to its Hero Ex Commander Allen West. I do agree that Poetry is not only to sing the songs of love and passion. Highlighting the flaws of our modern system is also the responsibility of a creative Poet. I really adore such efforts. Love and best wishes....Ravindra...Carolyn Devonshire.
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:03:00 AM
Politics, yes. It's who you know and it always has been. I've been in some very lucrative places in the past because of some high person I knew. Hats off to Allen West. Love, Dave
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:13:00 PM
Outstanding write, and being true is even better....I am a fan of yours....my friend was Tom Bell, I adored him.......
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:07:00 AM
Yes, Carolyn, you did enjoy my poem Red and Pink but I revised it to fit the contest of Linda, sharp memory you have. My compliments... and thanks for my placement in your March Madness and my March madness is based on the real event of the year 2000 in Windsor, Canada. So happy about it and my lasting remembrance, till date
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